Vaskez vs. Short Fuz

uppin for votes...................................

uppin............................................. .

vaskez won this i felt his stuff more it had better flow n better structure
V/V lol

return the favor plz

Vaskez came alot harder, better structure, punches, vocab and funniness...
This battle was really one sided, short needs to elevate alot...Keep dropping Vaskez

V/Vaskez

bump #5...........................................

lol @ this battle .

short .. ya gotta lot of work to do homie. you sound
like a pretty decent kid, so my advice to ya would be
to read some LLL battles, possibly check out the
help tutorials too. i dont wanna leave all negative
feedback cus its pointless. vaskez .. you got this battle
rather easily.. takin on a new kid. had a decent verse,
definitely not one of your top quality ones. but you
did win this simply for your veign of battling skills.

v/ vaskez

rtf vs shin .. forgot the link. on the 1st page i think.

Yo, that was some sick rap skills....i aint seen nothing like it

vaskez-
Today I ain't in the mood for this crap, I'll lyrically murder-this-cat
He gettin hurt-by-my-gat worse than Jackie Chan getting hurled-on-his-back
....nice opener and punch....
Haha, he told me he droppin heat when he raps, well I agree
When he sees me, he drops his gun and flees swiftly
....not bad here........
His shorty confided in me, "short fuz" means he cums too quickly
That's an old diss, but see, for this pussy, it still radiates applicability
.....good punch...and personal........
His flow sounds pathetic, worse than a blind dyslexic
Tryina read Shakespeare from braille with fingers that's prosthetic
.....another good punch........
I'ma light this Short Fuz and watch him collapse and implode lyrically
Fall apart intrinsically, he'll be like "Nooo! This is confusing me!"
Like a dude after a sex-change op discovering a lesbian tendency
.....nice punch and closer...
overall-9/10
nice verse here, especially for it being quick. thats some good shit. keep it up

short fuz-
Yo I'm gonna start this nicley
they ain't no probably
...uh what? elevate.....
n i don't even talk
i just do it like nike
...elevate.....
yo dude u a faggot/i don't mean to get personal
but this cat is a amature/like boxers that ain't professional
....elevate.........
i'll run up in your house/ n put da four up in your mouth/
the only click u ever had was on a computer mouse/
...decent actually.......
so act like u want it with me/ how dare u try it/
i ain't even looking for beef i'm on a diet
...hehe funny, not bad....
n as far as getting pussy mudafucker u fail/ da only sex u gonna have is your gender male
.....eh decent closer...
overall-4/10
weak verse. no hate man, you just need to elevate alot. just work at it and it will come. this was by far a one sided verse.

v/vaskez