i thought Sk had the better flow. it sounded more like something i wouldve written, Props to both they were both hot.
V/ SK
Vote on my battle, DME Prophecy vs. Infamous Dubbz its in the middle
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i thought Sk had the better flow. it sounded more like something i wouldve written, Props to both they were both hot.
V/ SK
Vote on my battle, DME Prophecy vs. Infamous Dubbz its in the middle
killa soulja
whoa you didnt do at all good your stucture was horrible and your flow seemed streched i didnt see much emotion either. nor did i see any good vocabulary no multiples nothing interesting about your peice even the imagery was off a lot. you need to work on imgery at most to win a topical abttle and yoiur stucture really could use some good help.
crazy gurl
very very good stucture very good flow and you have a nice use of vocabulary i didnt see any multiples specially eternal multis some very good imagery your peice was just straight up better by far. and i was feeling it too. work on multiples tho ight then soon we need to battle:thumbup: keep writing maybe we should battle soon if you wanna make a thread in bitch slapped, bitch;)
vote: CrazyGurl
lol at "CrazyGurl".....leave links
bump...I will return the vote
Carl - You had some nice vocab going for you and it was a well written piece. Some of your bars had multies, but some of them that didn't the flow was a bit off so just be careful of that. You had some lines that were pretty deep like I really liked the introvert line and everything leading up to it, but I wasn't really feeling the closer. I know you ran out of lines but prolly could have closed better. Overall though solid piece.
Killa- Ur a little bit off the mark here kid. Ur shitwas decent, but the emotion wasn't all there. Read over carls verse he had crazy good emotion and feeling in his verse. Overall ur not bad actually better than alot of new people at topics...nice work kid.
v/Carl....rtf in my battle vs. paul england in my sig...pz!
nevermind vote on my battle wit blitzkrieger when we both spit
carl hit my battle in my sig and vote plz rtf
killa gets this one cuz the other guy shit was gay
uppin for votes.....
yo this is the nigga 44k here if you want it step okay son....
im dying to battle wack cats..haha
kalibur i aint even gunna waste perfectly good lines kickin ur ass u biter.. eat me whore...ohh n uppin for votes
if any body wanna battle...come at a dog...i call guys out and no responce..im gonna leave this wack and find me another rap forum if i don't get a challenge soon..im tired of spitting at scared niggas.....
yo i thank its dumb for crazy ass carl to even battle the wack solja...fake killa vs. not so crazy kid...man give it up..i'll take on you both together..you guys on teams...im gonna stay alone....
im the hottest...can you find me some comp. nobody wants 44..whats up i got em all scared....
ima kill you bitch...