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G fukin ripped u apert that was horrible dude
Baby- Not really that bad of a verse but was lacking complexity, the flow was so-so, and you wre S/G yourself rather then attacking G, which made your verse alot weaker.
G- Nice verse, good complexity, you had a good flow and you also had some nice punches and really dissed ur opponet more then he did to you.
Alright, with that being said it looks like G had a much better verse, baby, work on makin your lines a bit longer and less S/G
V/G
yo pretty one sided. baby face. ok flow. structure was aight. u need to work on ur rhymes a lil better. and work on punches. i didn't really see that much in here. work on punchin the opponent. thats wat a battle is about. the punches are the weapons. keep writin.
G. once again. good shit. good flow and structure. i was feelin all of this. sum good punches even the part bout Celes. that made me laugh. ur really startin to pull off sum good shit man. keep it up. i'm likin wat i'm seein.
v// G for better punches and vocab and more creativeness