Derive (0-2) vs cameronj86 (0-1)

Kid's through. Everyone called Derive's a biter and a fuckin poser too
And the idiot bit the word of mouth just to say he spoke the truth
Wait, fool's a straight-forward mail, scratch the biting line before
Cuz just like bad chain letters...his words are resent-ed & ignored
Who in their last battle got whored? No need for links, it is evident
Cuz Derive's the old-head who fits the bill like American presidents

All pretty nice lines..

only thing from derive I liked was the cholesterol line, but it was pretty simple ish.

vote cameronj :thumbup:

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Originally Posted by NuclearConcepts

Its witty, thats all. The CONCEPT is pretty hard hitting, & it doesnt make sense by itself so he had to ask a question in the setup or obviously it'd be irrelevant. Its not like an insult or anything, its just witty.

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What good is a 'witty' line if it's not a punch? I really dont see how that could be a quotable from his verse. It seems that the voters just read and quote things because they 'sound cool', rather then ACTUALLY reading it to understand it and then make your choice. I dont mind losing, because I'm still shaking off the rust from the 1-2, but I atleast want votes to be correct/the right reasons.

because a really witty line creates impact. a 'punch' with no impact is useless. a line that isn't witty but has a lot of impact from the punch is cool. & so is a really witty line that isn't a punch. thats all

it was witty enough to be quoted over the rest of his impactless punches

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Originally Posted by NuclearConcepts

because a really witty line creates impact. a 'punch' with no impact is useless. a line that isn't witty but has a lot of impact from the punch is cool. & so is a really witty line that isn't a punch. thats all

it was witty enough to be quoted over the rest of his impactless punches

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So you're saying his verse had punches that didnt impact, so you quote a line that isnt a punch and vote for him? Interesting.

Yes because its witty enough to be more impactful than anything in the rest of the battle.

cameronj86 wins (1-1)

Derive loses (0-3)

Neither advance to playoffs.