iight more votes yall
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iight more votes yall
yo this battle was a good battle.....very close both had good structures and good flows.....both of u will become great if u keep elavatin
yo boy had a solid verse and came hard........he had some good punchlines but a nice opener and clozer.......
the other guy good verse and nice punches....like i said keep elavatin this battle was good.....
vote goes to yo boy d.......for a better verse....verses compared overall is yo boy=8/10
and the other guy=7.9/10 .......thats how close it was
Yo Boy D Shit Was Weak As Hell It Sound Like He Is A Newb That Was The Weakest Shit I Ever Heard And If I Could Vote I Would Vote 4 Innoh
v/yo boy d i think his shyt came off harder and innoh you had no rhyme sceme overall i think it wuz an ight battle but yo boy d took it
oh yeah hit me up wit some votes people one http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=187743
wow.. was everyone looking at the same battle? lmao.. i should have 3 votes right now because all 3 of the votes i got on the first page were broken down & explained.
uppers.
uppin vote
we need some votes people
yo boy d that was iight man u had good structure good multis
innoh you had a nice rap too but this one is going to have to go to yo boy d because of harder punches structure and multis
v// yo boy D
uppin
1 more vote people
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can't vote but i thought this battle was worth breakin down...
I spit so much, my lungs get SWELLED UP/
my tonsils get HELD UP/
as soon as you agreed to this shit, you just got your-SELF FUCKED UP/
~meh
Next time, I'll get more DETAILS/
for RETAILS, I ain't know Rapbattles was full of FEMALES/
~no...I ain't know" doesn't make much sense...this was inconsistent
INNOH..., you will have your chance, you will BLEW YOUR REVENGE/
and what I'll DO IF YOU WIN/
Is make you eat my shit THROUGH A SYRENGE/
~check spelling....WEAK
With the SYRENGES blowing with the power of many ENGINES/
I blow past your flow in with TEN MENS and VENGANCE/
~TEN MENS? i don't get this...weak
Hold up a dildo, like WHO'S IS THIS?/
It's INNOH.... what you USE TO KISS/
~BLAH...wack
Im snappin, rappin, attackin like this was your CRUCIFIX/
Put up your written shit, I'll tear that JOKE TO A PREFIX/
~don't get how u can attack it like it was a crucifix...wack.
vs.
Arrggghhh.. !!...
faggot you'll get ripped-son, 'your more of slide through' than a split lung
your shits dumb, hes 'next generation', because he'll never be anything in THIS ONE
^^NICE...*applause*
when was this herb such a star?, i'll beat 'boy', like ABUSIVE FIRMS IN AFAR !..
i mean, god.. who loses to someone that rhymes the same word in a bar?!!
^^ decent
a nerds what you are, get off the act-d, i'll cut your FETUS TO SORTS!
intell they can't stand 'the sight of d' like GENIOUS REPORTS !
^^aright
the meanest, ofcourse..his rhymes never manage, this guy isn't frantic
yea hes in the 'hood ya'll', hes a PART TIME MECHANIC !!!!
^^ AHAHA NICE
how many times has he panicked?..whaddu high with a fever, i'll beat this GUY WITH RECIEVERS !
then throw him high to the reeper, cuz it's 'loud in clear 'ds wack' like shovin his LINES THROUGH A SPEAKER !
^^ cool.
if i could i would vote inno...for just overall better word play and punches...nice job.