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nice verse homie good flow and structure and nice hook man i love that hook lol but foreal its deep and it could be a perfect song if u just change some rhymes and make them catchy u kno its like a good punchline and ull see that tha verse would be perfect man good job and just work on tha punches and tha delivery to those punches so it can b catchy aight so nice work man and keep it up overall verse rate 9.0/10
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That Was A Nice Rap U Got There Keep It Up
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nice piece man like the hook and nice verses
good topic dawg nice rhymes also
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good looks o nthe feed stil uppin
