bahh, screw you and your inners, you only have one in there, ahh well....i guess if you have 81 open mics in the hall of fame, you're allowed to be arrogant.....
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bahh, screw you and your inners, you only have one in there, ahh well....i guess if you have 81 open mics in the hall of fame, you're allowed to be arrogant.....
i enjoyed the concept of this piece...it was suprising and a little bit funny...
the part where you said the book was filled with bullshit content was funny as fuck ....vocab was average wasnt too hard to read...multies could've been used but didnt take away from the piece at all... rhyme scheme was decent ...overall i give this a 7/10....
RTF...would much appreciate it gettin slept on
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=184638
^thanks.
and i know, i didnt want to have a shit load of internals, that is just gay.. that and having a multi on every line.. sometimes simplicity is key.
Word.
I loved this. I left feedback in the battle that you posted this in.
Pz. man
I liked the concept, you took the topic in a creative way. Had some good ideas. There was nice vocab scattered throughout. You were descriptive, which helped you get your message of the piece out. The verse closed nicely, leaving the reader with something by questioning.
Thanks for checkin out my open mic.
anytime anytime, and thanks.
yeah man im wit u on that i think ppl should read the versus out becuz in they mind it seems different
uhh, alright.. feed maybe?
yo main shit was lyrical.. good use of vocab got some multiz.. but str8 up to be honest it was borning as hell.. why shood i give a fuck about what u think... u gota force me to like it main u gota make your fuckin words stick out and shit.. stay up doh that shit was pretty potentialy ill and shit..
wesstcoasst...
i really dont care what anybody says that puts "Wesstcoasst..." after their post.