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yo u called rythmagician this is wat i hear,
but i dont no why....cause the only magic trick is that u still here,
look me up bitch...."gattman"=the definition of fear,
--Okay-ish. You rhymed "hear" with "here", work on your vocab and creativity. Also your structure.
you hung up on andre n big boi i see,
thats because u relate to them.... your an "outkast" G,
--Okay.
ye i apologised to your kru....but pussy ididnt apologise to you,
you ever heard of a dictionary....pick it up learn some vocabulary,
--Take your own advice.
your rhymes should be outlawed G.....cause they a crime,
while mine r worshiped like god....cause they sublime,
--Weak. Try to stay off of yourself, and just attack him.
my lyrics all rhyme...an i always drop in time,
say hi to yo ghostwriter 4 me....cause u just a mime,
--Weak.
your style aint "free".....its $15.99 from hmv,
--Stop using a single line that rhymes with itself.
this battles over....signed sealed delivered,
yo souls broke n yo reputation withered.
--Okay.
vs.
Dude’s got a bum-rep, I already won and I ain’t even begun-yet
U’ll never lead, cuz yo, I got 6 leaps to go Beyond ur One Step
--Nice.
sendin' rhymes...aimed for his dome...answerin' his death wish in the knick of tyme....,
....givin' this fag holy scriptured lines...he don't do audio cuz you hear more cracking in his voice than bending spines!
--Ouch. Man, your structure is all fucked up here. Lost the flow.
i'm a starving heathing...cut ya lungs wit scalpels...now there scarred an' hard fo' breathin'...,
no more tyme fo' reasonin'....now i'm sendin' hard punches that hit ya screen...and leave ya Computa monitor bleedin'....!
--Nice punches, but you've gotta work on that structure.
Droppin-Holes,Inside-Of-Ya-Skull...The Flow Couldnt Get Any Deeper,
Battlin Me,U Crazy...I Got dis kid Facin-Death Like Standing Up To The Grim Reaper,
--Good.
Weak Verses N Punches,Im Sure It Aint Me Gattman Is Gonna Kill,
Cuz The Only Time He Drops-Hot-Tracks is When He Slips While Branding Steel,
--Eh, okay.
Nothing but a vocab head, cant rock raps and slaughter son
Talk bout 9's and gats? But you couldnt cock back a water gun
--I called the "water gun" as soon as I read "slaughter son". Work on creativity.
Ya Skill Is Compared To "Fat-Kids" In Gym Class Doing "Back-Flips"
A Magician Couldn't Help You If He Pulled Votes From "Hat-Tricks"
--Okay, nice play on your name and decent line.
my punchlines hitten your face leavin ya def in mutation
have u facin a loss, now u eye to eye wit a critical devastation
--Kinda weak, not much of a punch.
v/ rhythm.
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thanx fa da vote homie
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only 1 mre vote til i win
come on ppl vote and give good feedback
Holla
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yo rythmagician u earnt my respect today homey fuckin sick battle!!!
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ay all vote on my newest battle on my sig first one killed him im out piece
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Rythym you ate him from ur opener because his opener he rhymed HEAR and HERE wow thta was really witty and not played at all( sarcasm ) anyways you came harder too.....gatt grw up...i mean elevate man dis the real thing man step it up.....good try...rythym you got it for me peace....
v/Rythym....he ate his opponent from the start.....hey can u make me a sig rythym....pm me if you can!!! pz!!!
