Teckniques vs GRaFFiK NaTuRE

your battle statistics stay hidden,ashamed, we know it aint ur "nature" to be winning
u do lil contendin,give lil competition.like a sicence fictional textee u just pretendin
--Okay personal, but stretched lines. Weak second line.
let me paint u a picture.. better yet how bout a graffik(graphic)
kickin ur vocal cords around is the only way u can hack it(hackey sack)
--Meh, not really hard.
the fact is you hand me a victory like its a religious practice
what happened? battelin you is just a distractional tactic
--Weak.
dis kid loses so often failure is engraved in his history
so why do u expect me to handy you this victory
--Okay attempt, but not hard enough.
this kid is in his crib crying and screamin.dying from feeling
he couldnt look down on me if he was crucified to da ceiling
--Again, okay concept but you need to work on hitting harder, work on your vocab.

vs

: me and the fans concur when I say i'm killin this man for sure
I'll Slam this herb and my verse is breakin T's like golf amateurs!
--Good, original.
voters must be electronic music… cuz they be like Teck…no
you're getting paid? gotta kick yourself with nikes to see a check yo!
--Nike line's played, but liked the personal at his name.
If he tried to chat wit dames… the females would slap his frame
Shit we gotta go to Houston if we wanna see T-mac(k)in game!
--Okay personal on location.
You're whack n' lame…dawg I read your previous verses
And you couldn't write continuously if you were keyin in cursive!
--Haha okay.
This kid ain't the first to fall… crew battle? We merked you all
but why'd you gimme this herb? T's only tight if his shirt's too small…
--Nice closer.

v/ Graffik