Beteleuse's curse

K9 this was a good peice, but had way too many mistakes in it to be REAL OMHOF worthy, as it stands today, HOF noms' are 90 percent garbage. To inplace of In, in's inplace of on, and so on, although not serious mistakes in general, but damaging to the peices voice. It was a stuttered read for me because of these mistakes. Kind of like you rushed through the minor detials in the write, that really hurts a good peice more than one would think. It's not elevated, it's reads like someone trying to wing an elevated drop, and not taking such issues into consideration, or just doest care/know how... Looks good to others, but those writting on another level consistantly can see these things, because we are constantly scaning our own drops for such issue's. A HOF nom should be solid in areas, not lacking in critical ones, and very minor flaws if any. These stood out, in a few lines, I would never give such a peice a Legends Nomination or nod, and I'd have a hell of a time considering one for OM HOF. Although standards from OM to Legends are like night and day... Comb thru your drops and eliminate such mistakes in the future, once you become consistant at dropping seriously dope, you'll kick yourself for not seeing this sooner... Now don't get me wrong, there were good elements to this drop, but what I'm pointing out now will benifit you more than any pat on the back for a job decent done (so to speak)...