first off i know everyone else has said this but this topic is very played...although i enjoyed the simplicity of this piece while at the same time you came across many perspectives of the topic....
noncentz...
Create a man made virus have the fbi market it to the lifeless
Wait for popular demand then declair it a crisis.
Love is ment to be equal but if you aitn one of they people
They relocated to feeble concentration camps
surrounded by poverty and needles
these lines stood out to me the most...nice points made here...i wasnt too fond of your structure but non the less it flowed decent
na ledge...
Cause know it seems the Four Fathers dream was overthrown
By the Bush regime, and a whole team of political drones
Minds honed in on the pursuit of our national devestation
Look how Presedent Irrelevent handled the previous situation
very nice right here...i was feelin your structure and in my opinion you ended it very nice( and funny)...
overall noncentz i give a 6.5/10 naledge i give 8.5/10
decent collab keep droppin
