come on ppl
vote and give honest feedback so we can determine the winner
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come on ppl
vote and give honest feedback so we can determine the winner
i cant vote but da rhythmagician won that because he came with harder punches and he flowed and it sounded pretty good his vocab was okay had a couple big words overall rhythm 8/10 and m&m973wannabe 6/10 im out
thanx homie
try ta vote when u get 100 posts OK
this was an okay battle but when i get 100 post for the second time ill vote
Eminem937- UR SHIT WAS.... OK... BUT LIKE RHYTHM SAID U NEED TO WORK ON UR LINES A LIL BETTER CUZ ITS HARD TO READ...U IIGHT THOUGH FOR A NOWEIGHT... OK. U HAD A COUPLE OF GOOD PUNCHES... BUT UR FLOW WAS WACK... KEEP WORKIN ON UR SHIT AND U'LL GET IT DONE...DON'T SOEM DAY U'LL WIN A BATTLE...
OVERALL=6/20
Da Rhythmagician-NOW UR SHIT WAS TIGHT U HAD A LOT OF GOOD PUNCHES AND BETTER FLOW... U HAD BETTER STRUCTURE AND U DIDN'T SCREW UP ON UR LINES... U ON THE OTHER HAND DON'T HAVE TO WORK ON UR RAPS... BUT KEEP BATTLIN AND VERSE THE BEST SO U ACTUALLY KNOW IF UR DA BEST... NE WAYS U CAME HARDER... AND U WERE BETTER...
OVERALL=8/10
RTF in my sig for real....
thanx fa da vote homie
i'll keep that feedback in mind and keep battlin
thanx
need more feedback n votes ppl
tyte battle
yo rhythmagician y they ban u?.....................
em
a really weak verse as far as structure. work on your structure. you have to press the enter key after every single line son. a lot of people are gona look at your verse and vote against you strictly on structure, which is really dumb, but thats newbie voters for ya. but i actually read your verse, and i gotta say, it makes no sense. every line you make is simply horrible. everything. elevate in every catagory.
DR
your opener was wack. your closer was played (second time ive seen the infinity joke today) the cosby line was awkward as shit. the bun bar is real stupid. and i get it. its just real gay. the u just joined rb bar was filler. you have a lot of filler, played shit, and wack lines. this is just bad. you dont really punch em too hard, you just make weird references in your wordplay. elevate.
a really bad battle, but DR actually hit a lil bit and had weird but at least a showing of wordplay. therefore
vote- DR
thanx fa da feedback homie
i'll keep it in mind when i write anotha verse
uppin fa votes..............3,3,3,3
only 3 more votes til i beat dis kid
keep tha feedback n votes comin ppl
thanx for the feedback peeps. i'll work on my structure and shit.
DA~rythmagician , took this no doubt . I feel he had more cpomplex and structure .
Eminem973 you gettin better ! , just a little bit more elevation.
fav line="you would'nt shine over me if i gave you tickets to the sun " -rythmagician.
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Celestial
need more feedback n votes ppl
i can't vote in the poll due to the fact that i don't have enough posts, but if i could i'd definitely vote for DR.
em's was very tired, really corny, especially the alligator closer.
DR, your flow wasn't the best, but i liked the good bar line. the jello one was good too but the flow on that one was the worst of all yours. your punches were great, like the other battle of yours i saw...
yeah, so mos def DR took it.
maybe you two can vote in mine if you have time... -
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=182671