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uppin again^^
The topic was plain awesome, you set the scene really well and made your points pretty clearly. the imagery you used was good, the descriptive element really worked as well. This didn't need multis too work. Great read man.
keep on posting.
H'n'R.
Yes, I must agree with these guys, Very nice piece here man, I thought it was awesome...You had some nice vocab in there, one of the things that stood out to me...Imagery was nice in this as well, very well put i thought...Flow was pretty consistant as well i had no problem following along..I would leave more but im on a time schedule right now lol gotta leave for work and thought i would return some feedback before i go!
Thanks for the feedback on my piece. Nice drop sir :)