Decent peace, I'm not really into that poetry stuff, But is was still decent.
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Decent peace, I'm not really into that poetry stuff, But is was still decent.
^lmao
.. kids these days, only replying towards names .. dont even read.. bleh
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^ True that.
So.. you want to maybe edit that for me? :)Quote:
Originally Posted by Jekyll
oh sure :)
Yep.
^lmao...decent peace...Quote:
Originally Posted by ¤|-.Alpha.-|¤
now back to you guys...it can be seen it's not something you've put time into it because in some parts you could've rhymed more.Beside that nothing to criticize.The imagery was done well with the use of good vocabulary.And the two verses really fitted togheter well,and i liked that especialy that you both did this as a quick collab.Overall a fine read...Keep it up guys!
lol at could rhymed more, go elevate y0
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alright, i'm glad i checked this out and i find it very interesting how you didnt know what each other was writing and it came out the same way, that's really cool.. great minds think alike yes?
i liked how the lines rhymed together and it just seemed to fit.. good job to the both of you.
yup..
sigh
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