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G had cleaner structure a nicer steady flow and much more personal punches than the other guy... Other guy stop talkin bout how you gonna kill or what you gonna do and just focus on hits and punches.
Since G had stronger personal and way better line structure he gets the vote on this battle.
Vote G
ight well i cant vote...but both yall did aiet....i aient sayin who i thought won cuz it dont matter~
uppin up for votez need 3 more
you think youre tough bitch then go ahead please-bring,i tie a rope to g's nuts and see if he-sings, see if he-thinks that beeing tied to a rope he's really a g-string/
^ Okay
come get youre soul stole, ill empale a pole threw youre whole skull, pull back and kick youre nose-bone threw a hole in the ozone, get the thrown in youre place stolen,
so many blows thrown the ones in youre face are showin/
^ Aight
my words are spooky like a manor-or-mansion, this is a grammar-expanison for this stammerin-band-kid, in a war i be the last-man-commandin, sannin the floors for the last-man-standin, brass-hands-landin, cannons-demandin to blast the pathetic ass off his last-fan-standin/
^ Ehh
think you could chance it go ahead i dare yah to risk it, get youre tounge cut out from a sharper linguistics, embark on a darker exhistance, the enforcer which will torcher and stitch,mail you back to myself ask who order'd a bitch/
^ Lol
you disorderly switch spits to mimic-y-cripts, gimme-the-six, im limitless when it comes to gimmicks-and-tricks, out wit'em then i gett'em with a rythm-of-fits, that hittem-with-fists, and split his face open like a bottomless pit/
^ Nice
Me the G back wiv anova brand nu sound/
back 2 step up 4 anova few rounds/
^ No
u can't keep this lyrical genious down/
u enta wiv a smile u leave wiv a frown/
^ Wackk
on dime i make u look a clown an stupid fool/
kinda like wen 50 cent disses that fag ja rule/
^ Old
mash u up on the cyber microphone/
still the lyrical king atop my very own throne/
^ no your not
I'm just impossible 2 over throw/
u all know me as the spitter G/
the 1 and only king of D.I.M.E/
^ Ehhhh
my lyrics would slash thru ur ugly mug/
coz ur a wannabe and u fink ur a thug/
^ Fink? as in think? lol your such a teenybopper
i smoke my stash and rinse wannabes everyday/
ur a nobody but im still a household name/
^ Ok
i'll fuck u up in my bars don't matta wen i do it/
pain and terror im gonna fuckin put u thru it.
^ Wtf..
vote-wards
he came alil harder-had longer lines jus did better-other bull u gotta come harder harder punches better flow come at ur aponnet
uppin for more votez
yo my vote goese to g cause i thought he had a lil better punches than wards
wards did aight
but my vote goese to -g
uppin 3 need 2 more . uppin for more votez
need votes in: coco puffs vs. TRICKS
ward u did iight
excuse me...... please don't post other battlez in here only vote comments thanx-
if i could vote
i vote
ward
well i need votes thats why its there
OK battle but ~g~ won it
v/~g~
He had sum betta punches and a nice flow and sum of his rhmes were nice
u have ta keep wrkin on elevatin by keepin fresh rhymes and material in ur shit ta keep it hot
ok verse but u still have a lot of elevatin ta do if u want ta get betta
overall:6/10
wards- u really need ta wrk on sum more efective punches and add sum more metas and personals
also wrk on fresh rhymes n material ta keep ur shyt hittin
overall iight verse but it cuda been betta
overall:5/10
keep elevatin
v/~g~ for a betta verse that flowed better and had sum better punches
damn! need 1 more kinda like in this battle i want them ova.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hlight=%7EG%7E
uppin- need 1 more
u cud get banned ~g~ for spamming u r link to the same battle that we are in
jus lettin u kno u betta fix it