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check
here i go
gonna let this shit flow
like the bullet out of my gun u might wanna run yo
u gonna hit the groud liek a bag of bricks
or liek yo boyfriend mushroom slapped u with his dick
dont vote KALIKO he anit got no flow
and his lines are only gonna be so-so
i be swinging "punches" like master j*
sept my lines make his look gay
i the exacutioner and u gonna die today
u best be steppen messing with me that way
gonna tie bricks to yo fet and throw u in da bay
i make yo girl say hey rubbing my dick in her face she be getting freaka
hear dis this b the last line in my spit i end it with sumthing that'll make u shit
KALIKO u gay u lost yo way like a immigrant i hope u ant here to stay-
best be n yo fucking way
pretty weak...verse on the whole...you needa work on your punches alot more...include personals n multis...metaphors....make sure u direct ur verse toward ur opponent at all times...keep battlin thou n u'll get better...
kal
You just another e-thug. Listen to G-Unit then post ya verse.
Bitch, you couldn't "pop heat" without plugging in a toaster first
executiioner 'sposed to burst - You bleach money?? Cuz you got 'light cash
You bite ass - losing a race is how you "might last(get it??)
You write trash. How you gon hurt me - you ain't lern how to diss.
But bitch I'll "do you so dirty" it'll "burn when I piss"
I'm like "Sherlock Homey", - I'm peepin the proof.
ya line's'll neva be straight, if ya even tha noose
You really iller than kali Nah - you just thought so.
When I K.O. you, don't hate me - hate your off-flow.
Hate your long lines. Get mad and hate your weak verses.
While my style kill you so evil - your Pastor will speak curses
I'm the best with this - Posessed by the fuckin excorcist
I'm like your boyfriends dick, how often I "wreck your shit"
Me and the voters all laughing - but we good now.
CUZ I SAID COME GANGSTA & YOU PULLED YA HOOD DOWN...
nice verse kal...some good lines....decnet punches...good flow...and an overall good verse...keep it up...
hit up my battle with lockup.....pz
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ight
check
here i go
gonna let this shit flow
like the bullet out of my gun u might wanna run yo
u gonna hit the groud liek a bag of bricks
or liek yo boyfriend mushroom slapped u with his dick
nope wack opener
dont vote KALIKO he anit got no flow
and his lines are only gonna be so-so
so-so..lol
i be swinging "punches" like master j*
sept my lines make his look gay
Master-J sucks dick....
i the exacutioner and u gonna die today
u best be steppen messing with me that way
wack
gonna tie bricks to yo fet and throw u in da bay
i make yo girl say hey rubbing my dick in her face she be getting freaka
nope
hear dis this b the last line in my spit i end it with sumthing that'll make u shit
KALIKO u gay u lost yo way like a immigrant i hope u ant here to stay-
best be n yo fucking way
wack
not good...terrible actually need flow and work on structure:1/10
You just another e-thug. Listen to G-Unit then post ya verse.
Bitch, you couldn't "pop heat" without plugging in a toaster first
nice
executiioner 'sposed to burst - You bleach money?? Cuz you got 'light cash
You bite ass - losing a race is how you "might last(get it??)
lol
You write trash. How you gon hurt me - you ain't lern how to diss.
But bitch I'll "do you so dirty" it'll "burn when I piss"
hahaahhahaa
I'm like "Sherlock Homey", - I'm peepin the proof.
ya line's'll neva be straight, if ya even tha noose
ok
You really iller than kali Nah - you just thought so.
When I K.O. you, don't hate me - hate your off-flow.
nice
Hate your long lines. Get mad and hate your weak verses.
While my style kill you so evil - your Pastor will speak curses
ok
I'm the best with this - Posessed by the fuckin excorcist
I'm like your boyfriends dick, how often I "wreck your shit"
NICE
Me and the voters all laughing - but we good now.
CUZ I SAID COME GANGSTA & YOU PULLED YA HOOD DOWN..
ok
not bad at all dawg....8/10
myv/Kalio
rtf in my sig dawg....
here i go
gonna let this shit flow
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
like the bullet out of my gun u might wanna run yo
u gonna hit the groud liek a bag of bricks
or liek yo boyfriend mushroom slapped u with his dick
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
dont vote KALIKO he anit got no flow
and his lines are only gonna be so-so
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
i be swinging "punches" like master j*
sept my lines make his look gay
do i have to say it?
i the exacutioner and u gonna die today
u best be steppen messing with me that way
gonna tie bricks to yo fet and throw u in da bay
Nah :nono:
i make yo girl say hey rubbing my dick in her face she be getting freaka
hear dis this b the last line in my spit i end it with sumthing that'll make u shit
KALIKO u gay u lost yo way like a immigrant i hope u ant here to stay-
best be n yo fucking way
OVERALL: 3/10 come on dude elevate half that shit was wack dont just throw in words cos they rhyme!
You just another e-thug. Listen to G-Unit then post ya verse.
Bitch, you couldn't "pop heat" without plugging in a toaster first
ok
executiioner 'sposed to burst - You bleach money?? Cuz you got 'light cash
You bite ass - losing a race is how you "might last(get it??)
OK
You write trash. How you gon hurt me - you ain't lern how to diss.
But bitch I'll "do you so dirty" it'll "burn when I piss"
cuda bin worded better
I'm like "Sherlock Homey", - I'm peepin the proof.
ya line's'll neva be straight, if ya even tha noose
Ok thn :huh:
You really iller than kali Nah - you just thought so.
When I K.O. you, don't hate me - hate your off-flow.
ok
Hate your long lines. Get mad and hate your weak verses.
While my style kill you so evil - your Pastor will speak curses
nice
I'm the best with this - Posessed by the fuckin excorcist
I'm like your boyfriends dick, how often I "wreck your shit"
Nice
Me and the voters all laughing - but we good now.
CUZ I SAID COME GANGSTA & YOU PULLED YA HOOD DOWN
ok
OVERALL: 7/10 some good punches and alot betta flow
overall:this battle was totally one sided kalik won this easy exacutioner try to elevate alot more and dont put words in cos they rhyme look at the tutorials dog
V-KALIKOZE911
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i will tell u that both that that was a hot battle and i know who im picking
v/k911
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You just another e-thug. Listen to G-Unit then post ya verse.
Bitch, you couldn't "pop heat" without plugging in a toaster first
GOOD
executiioner 'sposed to burst - You bleach money?? Cuz you got 'light cash
You bite ass - losing a race is how you "might last(get it??)
OK
You write trash. How you gon hurt me - you ain't lern how to diss.
But bitch I'll "do you so dirty" it'll "burn when I piss"
LOL
I'm like "Sherlock Homey", - I'm peepin the proof.
ya line's'll neva be straight, if ya even tha noose
SO-SO
You really iller than kali Nah - you just thought so.
When I K.O. you, don't hate me - hate your off-flow.
NICE
Hate your long lines. Get mad and hate your weak verses.
While my style kill you so evil - your Pastor will speak curses
SWEET
I'm the best with this - Posessed by the fuckin excorcist
I'm like your boyfriends dick, how often I "wreck your shit"
GOOD
Me and the voters all laughing - but we good now.
CUZ I SAID COME GANGSTA & YOU PULLED YA HOOD DOWN
IGHT
OVERALL: 8/10 SOME GOOD PUNCHLINES AND A LOT BETA FLOW
OVERALL
THIS BATTLE WASNT EVEN CLOSE!!!!!! KALIKOZE911 TOOK IT EASY!!!!
V/KALIKOZE911
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