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AYO Can i get some FEEDBACK AND VOTES PLZ.....................................
I NEED TO CLOSE THIS SO I CAN MOVE ON & BATTLE SOMEONE ELSE..............
DROP LINKS WILL RETURN THE FEEDBACK.1
I REALLY NEED TO CLOSE THIS BATTLE NAN YOU POST SOME FEEDBACK, MORE THAN ONE SO IT DONT GET DQ'D, AND DONT FOR GET TO POL YA VOTE.....GOOD LOOKN 1
KALIKOZE911 vs. exacutioner
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=179391
AYO Can i get some FEEDBACK AND VOTES PLZ.....................................
I NEED TO CLOSE THIS SO I CAN MOVE ON & BATTLE SOMEONE ELSE..............
DROP LINKS WILL RETURN THE FEEDBACK.1
I REALLY NEED TO CLOSE THIS BATTLE NAN YOU POST SOME FEEDBACK, MORE THAN ONE SO IT DONT GET DQ'D, AND DONT FOR GET TO POL YA VOTE.....GOOD LOOKN 1
AYO Can i get some FEEDBACK AND VOTES PLZ.....................................
I NEED TO CLOSE THIS SO I CAN MOVE ON & BATTLE SOMEONE ELSE..............
DROP LINKS WILL RETURN THE FEEDBACK.1
AYO Can i get some FEEDBACK AND VOTES PLZ
ONLY NEED ONE MORE VOTE TO CLOSE THIS BATTLE THREAD.....................................
I NEED TO CLOSE THIS SO I CAN MOVE ON & BATTLE SOMEONE ELSE..............
DROP LINKS WILL RETURN THE FEEDBACK.1
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He SPIT's HIS RHYME'S W/ X-LAX, CUZ HIS VERSE's 'FULLA SHIT'
I WOULDNT feel ya SIXTEEN, IF ya filled me W/ A CLIP.
v/Kalikoze. Lockup's verse didn't resemble a battle drop. There didn't seem to be a concentrated effort to put your ideas together for one drop. The double space was not needed, and you dropped a paragraph format verse after kalikoze. Kalikoze had wordplay, probably took it easy, put in filler, but that's the beauty of dropping second. Work on your punches, and wording them in the best way.
Return the favor below, please.
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Originally Posted by Kairos
APPRECIATE THE FEEDBACK............................GOOD LOOKIN.
DROP LINKS WILL RETURN THE FAV..........
VOTE TO CLOSE THIS BATTLE......
eh.
lock up- elevate. your rhymes were very elementary.
you pretty much need to work on everything. strcuture, punches, creativity
etc. etc...your verse was pretty much crap.
kali- yours wasnt that good either. you threw mostly filler and statements
and "im gonna kill you" threats. blah. and sex jokes are played to hell.
unless you know how make em dope. like twixn's punch in the 1-2 league.
work on creativity and wit. and try to harder punches. the name lockup?
seriously you could have made some wordplay on that. anyway elevate.
v/kali