dope shit i liked the opener
good flow your improving. check for my diss you might find it rather intreging.
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dope shit i liked the opener
good flow your improving. check for my diss you might find it rather intreging.
It was pretty obvious you didnt put much effort into this. I liked it though. Had nice flow, simple punches, structure and rhyme scheme were tight. These were probably my favourite lines...
i've had enough of your crap, so now your noise stops
type of loudmouth that'll try n move into his voice box
poorly worded lines.. n on yahoo, ain't no maskin it bitch
kid was like a fuckin waiter the way he was askin for tips
you're wacker than shit, tell me who wants to be this prick?
n i'd walk a day in your shoes.. but i can't reach my dick
Overall a jood job.
*waits to see wat bgizzy replys with*
nightly a queer, and me? shit.... i'm dope and i'm big
wish i could say the same for you...
... regarding my quote in your sig
ROFL
Overall this was pretty good, a few dope lines that made me laugh.
^ shit yall need to get off of $pits dick it wasnt even that good.......Oh I mean Lay Doubt
EXACTLY!!!!!!!!!!!!Quote:
Originally Posted by Lay Doubt.
:thumbup:
I aint goin perp though, it was a few bars I liked.