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very nice a very fucking nice read lmao from start to finish you realed me in not once did I schim down the OM to get to the end big ups to you on this OM this may be my first nomination lmao

I could give YOU a name, but I must be weary of backlash to me
So for now I'll just call YOU.........................American Society

^ keep it up man DOPE


peace

Thanks...more?

please dun sleep

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You never cease to wow me wit your stuff, this was real nice. This whole concept was nice. Some real words, great vocab, great emotion, great everything........it was all on point. Keep spittin the hot stuff Lyric!!!!

this was long as hell but way worth the while. i can relate to it in a different way . would like to do a remix to this if so hit me up on my pm. we can have the black an white version. peace out

Eh it was as long as I thought it'd be, but it was very good.

Fav lines from each verse:

verse 1:
I jus stood in the corner smoking, but the light revealed my fright
Lung's black I didnt wanna see YOU, so I exhaled night

^ A poetic feel to it, I have had the same thought before so I liked this a lot.

verse 2:

The media skews images, and feeds into Your very fears inside
Land of equal oppurtunity? We got more of a chance to die

^ came right after the quotes, made it pretty nice sounding, I liked this the best out of everything.

verse 3:

Or kicked out of stores, cause people expect me to steal
And being randomly searched, cause I'm expected to deal

^ felt on this... Not taking it overboard but stating a point. Good.

Overall this was a very good piece. 8.8/10

Keep makin OMs.

anyone who even mentioned that it was long.. is stupid.. haha.. it was 16 bars a verse, so it was a full song, not jus a lil 20 bar spit most you drop... onto reply, i liked it alot.. it is a very valid topic, 'cause i know in my city if you're tamil or persian, you get hated on.. there is a reason for the violent stereotypes.. mainly that all the tamils i know are fuckin mental.. swarm on you in a pack an cut you up like string cheese... but aside from that, not all are like that, and you did make it very clear in this piece that you were not.. the YOU YOU YOU think, yea i think as a audio it would have alot of effect, really get the point across... 2nd verse i ain't agree wit the headlines, 'cause living in toronto honestly, it about 50/50 white crimes to other races.. and we are all treated the same by the media and police.. but the imagery in the verse i liked, had teh crazy mental image..

overall i liked it.. good topic, an' you pulled it off...

IJL BABY... haha... peace

yo dat shit was deep son, long read but definitely worth it. u got a real talent