Weakness

i guess from the replies this was one of my best yet? yeah, ive accomplished summat!

more replies!

Yeah this was definately a nice piece.. Good rhymes and flow but it did have a hint of poetry as previously stated. I enjoyed it though, the poetry worked well in this context and it illustrated your writing capabilities. I haven't seen many of your other pieces but I'm guessing this is one of the better ones.

Nice work.. If you could check out "Trinity..." in my sig I'd appreciate it.

Peace

woah i love you guys...am i a legend of the month then? :)

i like this so im gunna up it again.

im being too cheeky asking again lol

lol i love the way you & My Shortie right, yall find the Illest Vocab & really manage to Multi them.

Very nice Wordsmanship here, Impressive indeed

oooh thank you!