LMAO.
It was funny to me.
Dope wording and everything.
Welcome back Mr. Black.
OM.Month.Nod.
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LMAO.
It was funny to me.
Dope wording and everything.
Welcome back Mr. Black.
OM.Month.Nod.
Check mine.
To Be Honest I Didnt Think It Had Good Flow At All,it Was Put Together Aight,but I Felt Like I Was Reading A Page Of A Horror Novel.im Not Hatin Still Good.
This was dope, don't listen to these noobs - *looks at post above* :rolleyes:
I liked the voice you took, it was unique, and I liked the way you built towards your climax. The storytelling attributes of this were phenomenal, and I could picture it, maybe just my crazy imagination, but it came across as a kind of old horror film, with old-fashioned film noir style photography. & the text "flow" was on point, it really was quite elementary, but fairly well worked nonetheless.
EDIT: I just signed out of the topical league on HHS, but I'll take a look and maybe vote on this, and a few other battles.
Thanks for the reply on mine man. :)
nice drop.a little too long considerin the shit that happen there.nice ending,but can't say ya've done a great job with the story.wasn't that interesting,but it was ait.keep it up!
this was nice...but im sure you know..lol
Thanks. Reread it Fore. You'll get it.