Mr. Key vs Whatthefuck(elite list)

uppin............................................. ........

nothing

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You have alot to work on,but ill bang ur head till it ruptures
Even ur usernames sayin WhatTheFuck...is up wit ur structure
I coulda sworn this was a battle, guess were in English today
Cause this kid jus dropped fire...in the form of a class essay
what the fuck are u here for, ull never be good on any occasion
When u joined u added a +1..................to the herb population
Im done clownin this fool, so now ill proceed to smack the whore
But his flow is groundbreaking.....cuz no ones came that wack before

v/key..obviously

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=173614

nevermind.... 500 posts rule it says

up........................................ I think this is the 3rd one, i dont care to check tho, i dont know what i was thinkin when i set this at 500 posts to vote, i musta be drunk as fuck that evening :huh:

damn, up, 3.............................votes have been returned, new votes will be returned

Welp, this is my last up, votes will be returned.....

-breakdown-

very simple - do battle somebody on the elite list if your not even close to a newB. you need alot of work. key dominated in every categorie. simple as that. nice try though, keep working on your shit.

vote - key

This is one easy ass muh fuckin vote by far......... Just returning an honest vote :thumbup:

WhatTheFuck - ...I would give feedback but im gonna stick with your name :).... Nah just playing. You need to make your lines shorter, but your structure is quite well I can appreciate that. I say you had about one good line that was dissing key flat out but you need to start getting more creative with your concepts.

Keystyle - I wasnt feeling the opener bar, I mean some people might call that "classic" but it wasnt that funny... I mean a lot of people spit before checking in so well it wasnt great. Your a good writer no doubt thanks for the props, but you easily took this... Just for coming better overall with a fresh key to it.

v/ - ...Keystyle...

Wow, one-sided battle.

Key's verses/punches, whatever, always makes me laugh at one point

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LOL, at this kid, i dont know where to begin
Kid so dumb, he drops his verse before he even checks in

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and that's what he did wit hthe very first punch. Overall, Key had the wittier punches while "WTF" practically had nothing.

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You have alot to work on,but ill bang ur head till it ruptures
Even ur usernames sayin WhatTheFuck...is up wit ur structure
nice wordplay
I coulda sworn this was a battle, guess were in English today
Cause this kid jus dropped fire...in the form of a class essay
what the fuck are u here for, ull never be good on any occasion
When u joined u added a +1..................to the herb population
i laughed.
Im done clownin this fool, so now ill proceed to smack the whore
But his flow is groundbreaking.....cuz no ones came that wack before

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"WTF" had nothing really nor could I understand his structure. His flow was off at times .. this battle was easy.

V/ Key - for coming wittier and making me laugh.

WTF - good start I guess, but you need to put a structure to your verse. Like you can't follow the rhymes very easily the way you have it so do it the way Key and amost every other person on this site does it so it's easier to read. Other than that, you had a lot of disses in your verse, but none of them were very harsh. Work on using metaphors and creative wordplay to diss your opponent.

Mr Key - The opener was a pretty solid personal. The rest was decent but nothing special, though the class essay line was pretty good. Umm, keep up the good work, good flowing verse with creative concepts and he didn't have any of that so you easily win this.

Vote - Key