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nice drop man.liked the chorus,simple but deep.the piece has some strong emotions in it,but was short,should've made it longer,put mo feelin into it.the usage of vocab was ok,structure olso ok.the piece itself was as i said nice,but again should've done it longer since ya have the chorus there twice and olso an outro,which has a simple scheme,but was deep and on point.keep writtin man
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Damn this was a real deep piece. I enjoyed reading it alot. I thought that the emotion was on such a high level in this damn. The content in this was great and I was really feeling it nice work.
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I like the ending. :thumbup:
