Braggadacio.

a solid little piece caramac. fairly straightforward subject matter, occasional multis and some nice one-liners that had me smiling.

"Im tryna bag me a fiend ..
.. in lavender jeans,
Who throws her head back when she screams .."

had me laughing. good work. my only real criticism is that this is too short.

keep posting.

Lol at telling ME to keep posting when there is over 7000 posts on my other account! :^)


Nice to see you still around ..

You were descriptive, and you took the topic a different way than I expected. Had some nice concepts. For entertainment purposes, it works. The rhyming was good, seemd to work with the different structure you went through.
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Dope cam, i could tell what you were trying to do here with the less intricate plot.
keep dropping um son...

lol I thought this was a dope piece Cam and I thought that the last line was a great way to finish a piece like this. I liked the flow that was cool. But most of all i liked the piece itself it was a good message to all the bitches.

Chea!

Foreshadow knows how we do ..

Hi.