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Lyrically_Insane:
An x-ray shows a dick in yo stomach…......this KID’s been wit many-gays
My punchlines leave U‘speechless’ but aint like U ‘had a vocabulary anyways
^^Good punch
He lacks crudentials but like "puerto rico" wanting to be on the map
Frustrated by inabilities..like "handless giftship workers" he can't wrap(rap)
^^word play off rap is played..................
You'll never be an issue until you really UPDATE your wacked out text
while yours suck,my verse is taken a Haik(hike) more than social rejects
^^Pretty good......
Ya punches could be "Alexander Graham Bell" an not fathem connection
You'd have an alergic seizure if talent was administered in injections
^^Good .......
Your punches complexity's like Asians standing under tha bombs of hiroshima
Opposing me with yo 'skilled' verses is dumber than registering a stolen beemer
^^okay ender........
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843-Kid:
u think ur hot but ur rocking my name
and u sound more like shit , u in need of raising ur game
^^Weak and no punch
better yet in dis one line u'll already be losing
left cold in ur blood wit ur throwback stained
^^Wtf.........
i'll spit in ur coffin screaming the a-town athemn
yo puches comes once in a while, mine comes every stanza
^^NO.............
better yet every two lines plus i got two nines
that'll leave u hurting in pain more then niggers wit two lifes
^^*sigh* No
but keep u coming back like a sex addict wit two wifes
red dot on ur head u in need of a couple new rhymes
^^NONONONONo weak and no punches in your whole verse
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This battle was clearley one sided..................Kid your verse was way to basic and simple......work on metaphores and punches first...then battle again.......look at the tutorials on this site.......Lyrically......You had a good verse.....But you need to work on PERSONALS.........i saw none in this battle.....from either of you.
Vote: Lyrically_Insane
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need sum votes in here people!...drop yall links and ill vote.....!
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insane got that shit hands down... if i could vote i would have..... someone please vote on this battle i had earlier no one has voted and i ate this kid up..... i want some kind of a record... i dont even know had to put the link on... i just started this shit today... the battle was with this herb osm though holla back
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ight break down
LS-TOOKT HIS CAUSE HIS OPENER WAS HOTT...ONE THING THO TRY 2 GET AWAY FROM THE DICK GAY SHIT ITS GETTIN PLAYED OUT...UR STYLE IS RAW FOR THE FACT THAT when u spit u spit with desire 2 wanna win also cause u wanna elevate...U ALSO GET my vote cause da other dude spat second which gave him time and he fucked it up...
KID-UR A NEWB I UNDERSTAND THAT...now elevate ur vocab and quit with the mama jokes bullshit...the best way to beat some1 online is to diss em by usin jokes thats all it is...jokes we aint heard b4...so keep elevatin
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quit talkin about...'if i could vote i would'
...and then leaving yo links and telling me to vote on yall battle....just leave feedback...dont come in here making excuses for me to vote on yall battle!....
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there u go pimpin now that i can vote i gave my vote.....
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in this battle has just 1 wiiner and its insane,i dont even say this another fuckers name........vote Insane
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An x-ray shows a dick in yo stomach…......this KID’s been wit many-gays
My punchlines leave U‘speechless’ but aint like U ‘had a vocabulary anyways
He lacks crudentials but like "puerto rico" wanting to be on the map
Frustrated by inabilities..like "handless giftship workers" he can't wrap(rap)
You'll never be an issue until you really UPDATE your wacked out text
while yours suck,my verse is taken a Haik(hike) more than social rejects
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this verse basically killed 843
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843 had some structure but his punches were weak sp my vote goes to lyrical
