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vote here, both of u plz: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=173579
Ex, won this for me for comin with a more harder battle verse.. with the attmpted punches.. most of them came nice, but sounded like self glory lines to be honest, 3x didnt come hard at all, no punches were really hard.. and connected, personals in this battle was pretty poor, was there but weak...
both structures was fucked EX ur lines were a bit to long, shorten em up a bit..
yeah, and EX cut out this '''' and " " to show ur punches.. its herbish..
v/ex
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Thanks for the vote, But do you really even know waht your talking about??? Half of the time? ' ' those are for to show wordplay... And self glory is talking about yourself and I've been rapping for over 4 yrs so why would I do that in a battle, And personals are talking about my opponent or anything that has to do with him wich 80% of my lines were... Thx for the vote but learn what your talking about...
Uppin
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yo im givin this to EX. he came harder and i like the way he put it all together,
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Thanks for voting everyone, Still uppin for votes tho...
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decent battle sorta. 3x you really need to elevate. you came with metaphors that couldnt make a retard think twice about em. excalibur you came weak, but you came better at the end. therefore vote excalibur.
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Punches-excalibur
Flow-3x
Structure-3x
Wordplay-excalibur
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This battles been over fag, How did it get re opened???
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Excalibur - Nice flow going, not a bad verse. You had a lot of creative ideas like the church thing especially but work on your wording so the punches hit harder. Also another tip, don't talk about things people won't understand. Like you mentioned your open mic.. I've never read it and you can't expect voters to read it so don't make references unless they are obvious in what they mean. Other than that though, good job, solid verse.
3x - Sorry, not a fan of your verse. You had extremely basic rhymes and really brought no punches out to the table. Work on using more extreme vocab and trying to throw interesting punches. Excalibur used some good similies, that's what you gotta do too if ya want to win...
Vote - excalibur
Please hit the sig, thanks
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Iight, Thanks for voting, Can we get some more votes tho????
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im have to give this one to X...he came alot harder n his verse seemed more of a batttle verse.....he attempted punches...some came of but some didnt....X try n get you lines a lil shorter n work on ur punches ight....pz
3x dawg.....them punches let you down a treat.....something you gotta work on ight...plus your verse seemd a lil self glorified to me...try goin at ur opponent more....use personals n shit ight
but ima have to go wiv X on this one for harder punches n a much better verse
v/X
hit up the battle between me n eminem
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Can we get some more votes in here please????........
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both had ight flow n punches but ex attacked harder if i could vote it wood b ex
it up my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=175784
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Ex-Cal : Your Flow was a little Choppy in the Middle.
but you had better punches by far, your shit was a lil
more complexed in a Good way though, Could have Been
Better.. but g'yea.. .. ..
6.8/10
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3x : your flow was ok. it Flowed right, but your
punches were shitty.. fo'real LoLoL.. i Laughin with
you, not at you.. On Game..
ok.. your punches werent as Good as Ex's.. and thats
what a battle is i guess... blah..
4/10
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Can we get some more votes in here please????........
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My votes for ex cuz he came harder nd he had a betta flow nd he threw mo punches out