Dear Social Services Worker this is Kevin

yo now this is a tight ass flow...
this is the kinda shit i wana hear everyday...
keep shit like this coming..
it makes me actually feel i little misty:P...good work dawg

nice, thats a crazy ass situation. nice flow and everything. good job man

FUCK !! fuck the feedback dawg.........thats the best OM drop ive seen on this site so far !........fuckin' loved it 100%.........the story was excellent.......they was you empathized with the kid was excellent....the way you portrayed his innocence was excellent....the vocab was completely in role and.....wait for it.....EXCELLENT....

i could go on about this drop all day...all im sayin is " Hall of Fame " nomination.....and PM me when you next drop an OM !!!!:thumbup:

Thanx ..........*smiles and blushes*

This was very interesting. I thought that your flow brokedown in alot of places and made this piece a little bit messy. In some parts it was hard to read but you had a decent concept.

this was nice, smooth storytelling all the way through, pretty impressed with the consistancy, was able to picture it the whole time in my mind.. good story at that, nce content, overall real nice piece, return the favor and hit my joint up
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yo this piece is like my life when iwas that age no JOKE (axcept the molestation shit) but fa real do it was like window into my forgotten past thanx fo bringin it to light this shit is the realest i have ever seen on any keystyle sights big propz dawg keep it droppin and FUCK THE JEALOUS ASS HATAZ 1 :thumbup:

yo i was feelin' this as well mayne.. fo sho

story kept me going till da end... like a blend of emenem n Dmx or sum shit

vocab not nessassary

not the purests text masterpiece... but a damn! good spitz.. & would make a good audio rap song....

yo this peice was original... it was great wording.... nice skillz ... flow was dope, stay up...Lock

I liked this, it was very nice...Im apart of DCFS, living with my grandmother....I could relate to this alot man and i appreciate such originallity....Homie stay up!~

Really liked this...

Message was so good about things which unfortuantly go on in too many households. Flow was good with the whole simple thing. What got me the most was the message and emotion shown

Keep at it

this was probably the best peice ive read on this site in a while just keep spitin an dont ever stop peace out dawg