^^^just shut da fuck up already bitch........and thnx Crucial....lest battle DR PUNK
or too scared??
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^^^just shut da fuck up already bitch........and thnx Crucial....lest battle DR PUNK
or too scared??
Hayel nah I ain't scaredQuote:
Originally Posted by Red_
I'm just new here so I don't know what you were telling me to do to battle. Where is BITCHSLAPPED?
^^ just stfu and get the fuck outta his thread.............
fuckin noob.................
just set up the battle and give him links to click on so he can go there.........
aight nikaa.....thanx for all the help Stat
It was aight. Kinda slow in the beginnin', but you packed some punch in there, I must say. Keep it up, homie.Quote:
Originally Posted by Red_
Yo, check out my song I wrote. This is the thread.......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=172169
aight thnx homie...ill check yo song
upping this!!
yo UPPING this ppl,please leave feedback and tips on how i can improve,oh and check out the incoming Collab with me,Lyrically Insane,and Stat
this about what that man said about spitting from a personal view instead of a third person view. You can take someone elses personal experience and use it as yours just so you can connect better you kno what im sayin? For example say you dont drug deal but your spittin about drug dealers, if you spit as if you were a drug dealer and you kno what you talkin about then you can make a better connection with anyone whos in the situation of whatever your rappin about.. im jus a newbe to this postin so what do i kno, thats my 2 cents..
lol^thanx for the advice bro...ill take that into condideration!!!
upping
first post? Nice drop! i felt it man - started good but dropped in quality towards middle and end but you could have taken ure concepts and ideas a little further, developed them further to add more emotion, meaning and emphasis to what you want to say.
keep on it bruv
aight thanx bro..uppin this
I thought it was pretty good.. for cryin' out loud nigga.. my first drop I got nothin' good.. all criticism.. but for you.. I guess it was different.. keep on elevatin' and drop more and more.. and soon it will just come to you.. this whole thing will become a part of you.. you hearin' me out dawg..? aight goodshit..
-Snikerz
thanx bro....^^^lol
upping this
i like your format homie...style is real i have no complaints brah -daps-