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collab* my bad
Yo i appreciate you all...much love...leave a link ill hit it up...
vocab here was tight... real tight... its good to see alot of heads uppin their shit with vocab and what not.... content was nice... rhyme scheme stayed dope, but got syllable-fucked at a few parts... an extra syllable can make a huge difference when it comes to adjustin multies to a certain length of how far (syllable wise) u want it to go... but thats just my view on it coz i like to maintain my rhyme scheme on 1 level and not switch it up or mess around with it soemtimes, coz it can sound quite.. ehh.. but anyway the rest was decent... real good imagery in there, dope shit..... keep it up..
and hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=171622
peace
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Your turn is finished, should've known I cant be learned or mimicked...
Like a mystic magician, my wizadry cripples all competittion...
I'm like Jesus on a mission to bring you all of god's religions...
I would open your mind, If my lyrics could cut like an incision...
I'm divine in sight so I can see truth through the lies in vision...
These are just some lines that I had to stop reading and say 'damn' this piece was talent thats the only to describe it and I usually dont like half the stuff i read on here whether its 'conscience' or 'gangsta' rap most of it is just alright to me but this one was hot i coul tell this is natural it aint forced u didnt have ya dictionary wit u when u wrote it and i like to read stuff like that i never read none of ya stuff before this so i dont know if you always come off like this but if not stay on this level cause this one was good and ya flow was nice so keep droppin
yo ya vocab was on point had a good flow all togetha this was ill shit yo keep up what u doin
yo this was fire right here big up
well I Tell You What I Think
I Think That This OM is a Piece of ....................... Sickness from The Rap Hell Of terror EELETE ripped them lines like Rapist Rip Pussies And Personally thats Some hard rippin LOL
One word to describe this
Spectacular!!!
kepp it Up Mayne
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