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Sylentz -
Im gonna have to post first, although your widely know for feeding
even your girlfriend laughs durin sex......no matter what shes readin
nice opener...lol
another forbidden sickness........damn its like youve got H.I.V
online so much, your street language changed to "lol, o i c"
good punch line..lol
fuck the rest?, this kid thinks he can be one of the best
hes that much of a retard......he even failed a fuckin iq test
lol...another good punch
your a hillbilly kid....so what the fuck you rappin for...
you bin married 3 times.and still have the same inlaws
lol a this line..tight punch
this gucci cross dresser likes to eat drink and "be mary"..steppin out in high heels
he lit a match in his kitchen....blew his house...right off its own wheels
dope closer..lol
Sylentz-dope verse...used original punches an wordplay...good vocab
Gucci^
Gucci takes the "piss still" just to show you aint on "something dope"-
Compare me to oral sex with a vice grip the "niceness" causes 'Crushing Blow's'-
ok opener..
This kid is dreaming of success- forever like "Peter-Pan"-
He's just like the character cuz his punches 'never-never-land'-
like this line..but played
Syl the balls in my spits, are more than what your whole crew measures-
I'll ground you then punch ur torso till I 'bury ur chest' like "lost treasures"-
ok punch...
Syc is a loner and he has no-one like a table of even numbers-
Cos this dudes circle of friends is smaller than neck holes in babys jumpers-
nice meta..
I'm destined to drop flavourous shit while this faker get 'dicked'-
Cos ur like "Hulk Hogan shirts".. u were just made to get 'ripped'-
dope closer..
wordplay-gucci..liked his wordplay..sylentz could of came harder in this
vocab-Sylentz...was feelin the words he used an how he rhymed em..
flow-Sylentz..was feelin his verse...had consistent flow
punches-Sylentz...came with more original punches...some of guccis punches were played
V/Sylentz...came harder wit the punches better flow an good vocab...both had a good battle
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Sylentz had a more solid verse with more connecting punches because the concepts were more original. Gucci could've won and he had a good bar, but he just didn't follow through with the whole verse. Anyway, Sylentz had a pretty nice structure, with the excepttion of the last bar and good flow except for the "for/inlaws" line. Overall it was a good verse. Gucci, your verse had an okay structure, but I don't get the whole bold and italic thing, and the 'around' your 'wordplay' just doesn't make sense because it's like you're telling me I'm too stupid to understand your simple wordplay or whatever, so that took away points. Your concepts weren't too original either, but I liked the Peterpan one, that was your best bar.
v/Sylentz
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nothing dope from either
but gucci came played..the never land line is
soooooooo played man..seen most of ur other shit
before..the neck line wasnt very good..opener was weird
hulk line was ight.not agreat verse
Sylentz , came with fresher concepts..although they werent
really hard hitting.then were aight, and one or two funny lines
u came better overall
vote Syl
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Im gonna have to post first, although your widely know for feeding
even your girlfriend laughs durin sex......no matter what shes readin
fuck the rest?, this kid thinks he can be one of the best
hes that much of a retard......he even failed a fuckin iq test
Vs
I'm destined to drop flavourous shit while this faker get 'dicked'-
Cos ur like "Hulk Hogan shirts".. u were just made to get 'ripped'-
These were the lines that were good. Gucci, you had a decent verse and all of your punches were either pretty decent or just played. You didnt have a punch that made me laugh or be like..Ohhh...so yeah work on that. Sylentz, you had a decent verse. Opener was pretty good, gave me a chuckle, but other than that you had only one more punch that was good. Keep workin.
V/ Sylentz
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