dope piece.
great vocab and u gave great points. i like the finishing line and the chorus fit in well. i like the first bar in the second verse too. imagery was decent, but u were trully aiming for spittin points of everyday life.
dope peice.
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dope piece.
great vocab and u gave great points. i like the finishing line and the chorus fit in well. i like the first bar in the second verse too. imagery was decent, but u were trully aiming for spittin points of everyday life.
dope peice.
upping like a rooster with A.D.D. and one eye
yo that was tight man good job
upping for what could be the last time but most likely isnt
could i maybe get a bit more feedback, ill hit up links