Minority

decent storytelling, the flow came to be quite off at many points and the vocab wasn't that strong, i enjoyed the story cause i do notice that black people have grown to be more for segragation in these communities but i think it could have been better put and worded, it kept me reading though so i appreciate it in that sense, alright drop but theres room for elevation

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Thanks for all the feedback to everyone.......keep it commin
ill hit up links now

This piece is good it has a nice flow and some really good points.

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oh well kind of like an up that i didnt have to do............thanks for REAL feedbackfrom everyone else............pls keep replys commin

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