If mah name was in yo mouth.. this is for you

lol naw man the "read it...." was just in general for replies.. im glad u were honest, i know i dont use punches in open mics i like to use em in battles where they hurt u feel me? for a diss i just key whatever comes out, thanx for peepin

This wasnt bad you had a lota good personals but you shoulda made your punches hit harder.......still this was a pretty good diss to those kats ive seen dissen Deja Vu in other open mics.....i like that whole idea of dissing back and forth for fun on open mics... good flow and structure keep dropping.............

this was a good piece...I like this...though I feel that maybe you should have saved some of those hard hitting punches for a battle rather than an OM, Im sure youve got the stuff to pull more out your sleeve. Good disses and sense of creativity. Good use of mutlies in the beginning. Could I maybe make on suggestion?? This is a suggestion I often make to many people that do this....when you drop a verse, I think it works best when you dont use u or ur for you or your/youre or n for and or in.....Its just that it sometimes'll work against you if it throws off the reader, hence- throws off the flow and almost makes you have to take a second look. Just a thought, but besides that everything was sharp. Keep it up....

i liked it alot i mean it was better than good man dont be afraid to give the dude his props for him to go that long and then stay in subject and flow was still tight man yall gotta give dude a lil more than that was aight

here's my view on it, although there was a lot of big gaps and pauses in the layout, you managed to keep a good flow and it was able to add on to the set up in your punches through doing so. The punches themselves were simple yet the flow and setup increased the impact and that for the most part makes up for anything you were really lacking. Just to tell you though, due to the board's love for the real witty punchlines, many are ignorant in the sense that it has to have something you would hear coming out of chino xl's mouth so you might wanna brush up in that sense, but all in all it was dope

yea it was alright bro.........u had some pretty humorous lines in here........but it just wasn't my style..........iv seen better diss's but this one was ok...............just keep spittin and ull get better..........

Damn man, i was feeling this it had certain parts of this that was wow....It had real nice punches towards the diss..I liked the start.

I wasnt mentioned?

Smart Move.

smart move? like im scared of you? lmao
read the title, i dissed people who dissed me
you didnt diss me, there for no your not in it

I FUCKEN HATE IT
lol jk it was nice, I just wanted to say that caz the guy up there said haters will say that. I like it though and the wordplay in it was alright. Keep up ur shit.

I give it a 7/10

..Lol Ill have a OM on u in a sec center.

come on man, then ima have to diss u back n i dont feel like it
cant we all just get along.. ? i dont care if u dont like me
just dont beef with me.. try to keep it to yourself bro

LOLOL.


I dont feel like doing one right now.

See u in LLL again

i agree wit bio, that expo shit was crazy yo

I done been watchin this beef between da crews for a while now, good to c some beef to light up da OM.

This piece was aiight, not as hard hittin as Feebies was, but u came str8 on most of it. A coupla bars i dint feel, seemed like filler to me, but 3 or 4 bars were tyte. My favourite punch be...

u want chaos.. dont forget to calculate the blast toll
Where's Lay? the kids hiding in Shadows.. fuckin asshole

Dope wordplay and punch, made me laugh some bro. Lookin forward for em to respond.

Only thing i can think of is up some of ur punches a bit, i feel u bout its jus an OM but if u wanna slay them, then rip em up n leave da kids scarred like ur MJ or suttin nigga.

Keep droppin man. :thumbup:

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