Trace

I thought your use of vocab was alittle over
exagerrated...for one it really prevented the
flow from taking off i thought, i mean, im
all for using some complex words as it lets
you play around etc... with the topic but
sometimes it can be overused. Some more
internals or multi's would have been nice too.

I liked the complexity, even th0 it hampered
the flow i still thought it was deep...you put
out a good message and i thought that it was
a piece that you had to think about, not one
you jus read and instantly got the meaning and
answer to it. Overral it was decent, but no real
flow every took off, maybe down play the vocab
slightly & try to structure it better then it might
seem more fluent...decent th0...2.5/5

leaving some feed on this would be most appreciated.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=171441

Thanks for the constructive criticism I appreciate it.

Peace

hot flow nigga i see you out there doin your thing on dat keep flowin wit da mind and soul you a mothafuckin ghost writta 1 holla at da kid duce'em

Another piece resurrected heh... Maybe one day "Acceptance" or "The Truth" will be brought back to life...

Any more feedback is appreciated.

Peace