I really liked this alot for the mere fact of how hard it is to take something real from your life and put it into this sort of view in order to teach a life lesson. Many people just don't write about thier lives, they write about the things happening around them, or give their opinions on their thoughts and beliefs. Therefore, I found this real original. It had great everything. Nothing bad to say. Loved the closing line. Good work.
Check out my open mic "War Victims" or my battle vs 3x... thanks.
