structure was ok.. flow got rocky at some parts but other parts they were perfect... it was deep which was good since you wrote it in poetic form
you had really nice vocab too
very nice job nova.
overall 8/10 solid.
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structure was ok.. flow got rocky at some parts but other parts they were perfect... it was deep which was good since you wrote it in poetic form
you had really nice vocab too
very nice job nova.
overall 8/10 solid.
Thanks man, representing the crew :thumbup:
i personaly enjoyed this peice. i could sit and precisly break it down like everyone here likes to do but this was a nice poetic rhyme. fuck structure and all that other doctorate bullshit, good stuff homie
Whats up man. This is Nice ideed. I couldnt see any one spittin this. The bars are such different lengths. Thats why it REALLY seems like poetry to me. Good shit though man. Nothing i didnt like. Beatiful stuff . Keep this coming.
The vocab was good and ilike the imagery..good job
Thank Y'all