Civilized Gangsta .vs. Tim Corleone (Topical)

i dont see any links so uppin for the win

alright this is my last uppin

leave your links please

open:tim
closer:tim
structure:tim
flo:tim
lyrics:tim

basically I liked everything of tim's over civilized sry cg next time u'll get him!!!!!
v/ TIM

hit my battle in my sig vs skool not shizzle!!!!!

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Well its easy to see who won the battle. Gangsta the whole "............" thing completely threw off your verse the whole thing was a flowing mistake becuase simply put it didnt have any and ruined what good rhyme and ideas you had.

TC on the other hand had a good verse with good rhythm and flow and it seemed more fit for a topicall battle.