Damn FL, bump this up #4..........................
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Damn FL, bump this up #4..........................
Pope shut yo gay ass DR'n ass up please...anyway....
Alladay:
Pros:flow
cons:structure,lack of personals,played concepts
like that four leaf clover lien was weak,seriously
Mistuh_Authentiq
pros:I loved your flow
structuture was good also
the punches were good off and on
cons:I /HATE GAY PUNCHES
but you still managed t come up on top
vote/Mista
in indeph ur punk ass betta shut the fuck up, just cause ur boi got ass raped in this one( probley gets ass raped every tyme) im votin for allday bitch for wat i said earlyer
battle ME pope....................................
wack battle
all day- try comming with better structure your wordplay and disses where really elementary I wasnt feeling your verse at all I didnt see anything hard hitting it..
mista- pretty short verse but you came with better concepts and harder hitting disses in this battle than all day did I felt I liked the plays off his shit
hit up my battle against feeble if you guys can with a vote thank you
ay im game for dayz, hit it up, ima b gone for a while though
pope i unno da fuck u are on about mista auth took this hands down aswell, allday u need to use punches and personals, this aint freestyling... and work on ur structure and complexity.. ight 2/10
mista ya verse was ight, punches were pretty weak but won buy a fucking country mile.. the only one that even had a punch,personal lol 6/10
v/ mista
Iight
Mista took this at least he attempted at making punches, allday u was just talking bout some bullshit, u need to be more direct..it was like you was talking in general...Use wordplay and be complex wit cha vocab.....
V/Mista
Bump this up...........................................#5
let get it onQuote:
Originally Posted by MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
i gotta give this to allday both of yallz was tight but allday came harder it was posed to be 10linez but yall got to work that out so far v-allday
my falt i voted for tha wrong man i got tha verse mixed up my I VOTED FOR MISTA
allday - Work on some structure man, your verse was kinda all over the place and your flow was at some points going for ya and at other points way off. Also work on throwing punches. You just kinda rambled for awhile and there wasn't much that was harsh in there. Like you see the way he setup his verse, that's the way to do it so voters can follow it.
Mista - FYI, brunch is breakfast and lunch, not breakfast and dinner, hahaha, it's cool man, just thought I'd tell ya that. The barbie line didn't make a lot of sense but it was funny for some reason. The rest was a bunch of statements that weren't really hitting, but you take this cause you had structure, a real rhyme scheme, and a few more disses than he did.
Vote - Mista
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