...Eclipse... vs Miss Behaving, Topical

I cant vote.....sry Clipse :/ Miss B's in my crew :hump:

In this piece...

I feel that Miss had a much better flow going with her piece. She had pretty good imagery as well, but he piece didnt really connect with me and the topic...it was a great piece, just seemed distant from 'A Double Life'.

E on the other hand...
You had a pretty good flow, a little off at times, but the way you described and told youre story of a double life was really nice. Didnt flow as well as Miss B's, but I thought it was a better piece in the sense of the topic...

Good Job to both of you...

V-Eclipse.

Last up..

Vote!

Blah... Miss Behaving was ok.
But Eclipse showed a better storyline IMO.
I was more interested in Eclipses verse
Miss behaving was alright, not not as interesting
Eclipse had me atleast semi-interested

v/Eclipse.

eclipse i vote for you only because your story was easier for me to see happening than hers and u had good feelin and emotion in your lines.....Miss urs was good, but I liked Eclipse a lil more.....

v/Eclipse
hit my battles in my sig both of y'all...