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this was sick man i see how you mean that imagery is core to making a good piece i liked how it all flowed. my favorite line....
"This is a demonstration of my havoc...When my demon leaks...
It's hard to keep discrete...So Its time again to greet ELEETE... "
bad ass real deep....... Cali rep.
Yo appreciate all of you...An Princezz to be compared to someone like MuhThugga is compliment im unworthy of but thank you so much...
Final Up...thanks
This was a hot drop man your wordplay is sick!!!I like this piece alot man your flow was so nice too me and ya vocab just fuckin hit the spot nah mean!!!Overall 9/10 nice comeback my nigga...i'll be lookin forward ta seeing ya next post...pz...return the favor on my collab wit djb called everything happens for a reason plz
man this was deep i like your work your emmotion yest you images hit me hardest i knew when i first peeped you out youd expose a phenomilnol talent im so glad you kept at it and elivated you have one of the illest minds on open text i have ever seen i look forward to peeping more from you twin stay up
tuff ass drop son some real deep shit man how da fuck u spit dat shit neva know but dat shit was il kid young duce mad props big respect
Good piece...the flow was on but came off a bit when u started going on the same ending rhyme
"Lyrcial athletics is what I practice through verbal calisthenics...
Never will I sugar coat my words through makeup or cosmetics...
Shatter your vertibrae an replacem' with prosthetics...
Until your entire phsycal is covered in synthetics...
I guess it must of have the been way i was reading it cuz everyone else likes it
You'd have to spit it...
The vocab was sick...Words that fitted perfectly
Font was kinda big hard to read
It's like my alphabetics have turned phonetic...
Cause no one understood me the first time that I said it...
Fav part
Keep it up bruh
wow
nice piece man, u have nice imagination and flow, also u had key voacb with aww points. good situations.
work on structure a lil but this is the best piece ive seen in a long time.
9.7/10
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Originally Posted by unspoken
very dope...ill vocab..of course...i loved tha multis and tha structure...you utilized a large amount of complexity in this piece which was very ill....loved tha wordplay..i loved tha imagery..it was a bit short but that really had no effect on this piece what so ever....you always drop tha dope shit.....you and i should collab on some shit one day.....that would be ill....keep droppin tha hottness~1~