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I really like how you write verity.. I've liked everything form you so far...
Toying with new structures is always good and you really did well with this, not only did it work well and sound good.. it was appealing to the eye..
You stayed pretty well on key with the flow and it helped with the fluidity of the poem.. It was obviously full of emotion of real pain you've gone through, and that is always nice to see someone getting their emotions out when they write..
But i really did like what you did with this structure... it worked well for you and i cant wait to see more... keep it up, good job
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I've never read anything from you, but i'll be sure to read more from you, that was really good I liked it. I enjoyed the emotion, good piece.
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you guys have no idea how much this means to me that you enjoyed this peice of work. Every single line, word came straight from my heart and the structure was based upon how im feeling, it kinda metaphorical. Hard to explain. Neway thanks very much for the comments and the looks.
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^^How you feeling about a collab?
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whats the topic?...
i might consider, depends...
;D
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I have a few in mind, I was thinking about this piece, and how it seems you have had a love trouble, and well I kinda feel in a love slump, would you like to write about our emotions, or would you prefer a poem that's unique and we can create a twist out of?
