Civilized Rebel .vs. ...Eclipse... (TOPICAL)

uppin 2 on this shit....................................

..eclipse..
You had a good drop you flowed nicely and gave a pretty good visual nice vocab and everything ill give you 8/10

Civilized Rebel
Your verse was just as good as your opponant but i think you came better with the imagery and emotion..........i think you took this.......not by much though.......9/10

VOTEL:Civilized Rebel

Um, can we have some TOPICAL heads vote on this.
People have no fucking clue what there talking about.

How does hitting someone with a car be the gratest night ever.
What The Fuck.

This was a close won...

Eclipse-This was an aight drop, but to be honest your verse was starting to bore me a little as you went further along. Apart from that, it flowed well and i liked your structure. Not a bad drop at all.

Civil-Your shit was nice man. It looked as though your lines were gonna be streched, but it actually flowed nicely, you worded your verse good which made it all come together nicely. Your verse kept me more entertaining than eclipses. Nice Job.

V//Civil, for having the better worded more entertaining verse. no hate. pz.

Re opened because Civilized received a crew vote

AHAHAHA Damn.... I loved this topical battle, a shit load... Was so nice..

Eclipse - LOVED IT MAN from top to bottom nice start nice ending, nice concept, nice story everything was nice and it even made me happy man...

CR - Aight, seemed like you were complaining about life for the opening... Just wasnt as perfectly starting as Eclipse's... No offense yo his just gave me better feelings..


v/ - ...Eclipse...

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Eclipse had a broader approach to the topic.
Civilised's was about nothing. In particuar.
Hitting someone with a van is not dope.
Or spectacular. I didnt like his take on it.

V/ Eclipse

hmm not bad

Expected more of eclipse, and thought itd be a walkover, but
civil came ok, not much imagintaion as far as the topic went
thought he didnt wqork with it well..eclipse on the other hand
came to the topic well.. and had a cool imagination,. although
it was kinda simply it still was a more enjoyable read, civil you came
better than i expected, but still need to work on imagination
and creativity..
vote eclipse

Nicely done guys.

Rebel: Nice take on the topic, quite unexpected, although in parts I felt it strayed slightly. Decent use of vocabulary, but I found your structure to be slightly off in a few places making it necessary to re-read to get it, overall a good piece tho.

Eclipse: You took a more straight forward approach to the topic, but it paid off, as you didn't make it into just another "sex" piece through careful choice of phraseology and imagery. Your structure was consistant throught out the verse and read easily. Well done.

Vote// Eclipse