drfunk1986 (K) .vs. Given Light (SF)

^LoL word @ my closing 2 bars, I was completely joking around on those hehe.


and it's not po-po...it's poo-poo.

Word upping leave links!

^^^^^lol... who is Green


Yo GL vote here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=169848

Breakdown-
Bout to be left for dead, nobody gonna look/
You ain’t half way to stardom, cause you gonna get shook/
no punch
…ya mistook all ya battles, they was garbage /
Goin against Moe and Scarecrow? They all retarded/
no
Using phrases like “Feeble Bullies Me”?/
Speak english man don’t nobody know what that means/
no
Usin the word Strategic like it was a Grammar Degree/
Bush graduated and yet he used the word Strategery/
aight
Given Light bout to be murdered by rippin your spine/
Your career’s gonna be over after I spit twelve lines/
........
Holdin mine. and I’ma continue to…despite/
Cause the bulb burned out for the Given Light/
ok closer

Drfunk1986, is that doesn't even count as a real name
So how are you gonna diss me, when you already put yourself to shame!
ok opener
I could go on about how your so damn fake and phony
But you think your so tight with everyone, you'd just end up calling me homie!
good
You talk alot of shit, and seem to run your mouth
Like the train tracks on your teeth, your lucks run out!
ok
I'm typing with my fucking eyes closed, and my spelling is still better
Then I can read, you know word by word, not letter after letter!
alright
The only thing I see even reasonably "funky" about you
Is that smell you emit, after licking the toilet seat when I go poo-poo!
no
Ha, I'm joking around look what I said "poo-poo", but people can still read my lines
Blowed up beyond all recognition, like you walked all over my "land mines"!
no

Ok Dr did ok for being new. but punches were wack, and for a crew battle, common guys.



v/GL

^I would vote but he's in my crew, have any other battles or om's than leave the link and I will vote or leave feedback, thanks for the votes.

Upping this buisness vote on this and please leave links!

u were both there on this one pretty fair battle but givin light had a couple better ones that i enjoyed
vote goes to givin light

-drfunk
elevate. Your verse had weak punches and filler. your flow was on point.
I just wasnt really feeling any of your punches.You need to be more creative.
agaon, elevate.

-given light
you had a couple of good lines. the rest was either decent or whack. you started alright but near the end it was whack. It didn tmatter anyway. your opner alone
won this for you. But you could have at least ended it good.


v/given light
overall better verse

Bout to be left for dead, nobody gonna look/
You ain’t half way to stardom, cause you gonna get shook/
no good opener
…ya mistook all ya battles, they was garbage /
Goin against Moe and Scarecrow? They all retarded/
^^who da fuck is dat
Using phrases like “Feeble Bullies Me”?/
Speak english man don’t nobody know what that means/
^^actually yeah i do, feeBle is a mod, ur dumB
Usin the word Strategic like it was a Grammar Degree/
Bush graduated and yet he used the word Strategery/
^^wuh!?!
Given Light bout to be murdered by rippin your spine/
Your career’s gonna be over after I spit twelve lines/
^^nice
Holdin mine. and I’ma continue to…despite/
Cause the bulb burned out for the Given Light/
^^nice ender n finally a punch
vs

Drfunk1986, is that doesn't even count as a real name
So how are you gonna diss me, when you already put yourself to shame!
^^lol nice way to start a verse
I could go on about how your so damn fake and phony
But you think your so tight with everyone, you'd just end up calling me homie!
^^nothin really
You talk alot of shit, and seem to run your mouth
Like the train tracks on your teeth, your lucks run out!
^^umm no
I'm typing with my fucking eyes closed, and my spelling is still better
Then I can read, you know word by word, not letter after letter!
^^umm nothin really again
The only thing I see even reasonably "funky" about you
Is that smell you emit, after licking the toilet seat when I go poo-poo!
^^hahaha nice
Ha, I'm joking around look what I said "poo-poo", but people can still read my lines
Blowed up beyond all recognition, like you walked all over my "land mines"!
^^i like da ender

muh votes goin to given light Beckuhz of his flow n atleast makin more sence....Both verses were whack tho.....elevate!.....~1~

v/given light

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