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hit this back before we start http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=167814
k sauce
aight..keep these words in center of ya sight,
its either fight or flight, so this lil boi is about to bite,
^^ nope u jus put buncha rhymin words together
ima like mike tyson, i be bitin ears,all this kid is doin is, lip sync'in like brittany spears,
youz about to end your career,mine is about to be made,
im drivin by in sick pourches while this kids walkin,people throw rocks at this kid...just for talking,
^^^ meh not bad
you say shit but i dont hear it, ya voice should be altered like steven hawking,
ya rhymes are slipery like droping the soap in jail, ima gonna be gawking,
^^ No
people are gonna laugh at you,so theres no point of stalking, the rap game,
this kid could be the black micheal jackson, touch lil kids too get fame,
^^^ hell no
but everyones knows flamers dont spit, they swollow,pick a spot on the cock N take aim..
^^ meh
CS
its the end of ya text faze this wack POS gets blazed
ya life is over.. when i put an end to your net days
^^^ lol not bad
ive seen k spit and to be honest ya rhymes are horrid
i mean abnormally bad.. this kids border line retarded
^^^ loil ur best bar by far
hes here n there, barely flowin n you aint sayin shit
'cept filler filler filler & our interest is fading quick
^^^ not bad
ya just another stat, ya wackness is bringin me down
he makes me wanna throw up.. maybe i'll swing him around
^^^ No
it dont take a genious to see k is gonna die first
ya sign off was perfect.. but it shoulda been in my verse!
^^^ lol nice closer
vote - cs .... i think he got this shit pretty easy harder hittin punches n shit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=167814
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K sauce verse was weak alot of ya punches was terriable
ya first bar was wac the middle of ya verse was wacker and the closer i didn't understand
my vote goes to center for better overall flow better punches and more personal that everybody could fell wit his structure
"u barely flown u ain't saying shit" good line everybody could relate to plus must of all sauce wasn't sayin shit no desrespect lol
take it how u wan't it my vote goes to center sight
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thanx for takin the time to vote everyone, ill hit up the links later cuz i gotta bounce right now but u got my word.. last up
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Center Sight
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Definetly a good battle verse all lines were aimed directly at your opponent...Punches were on point as well as flow and structure. Altogether nice piece.
K-Sauce
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Punches were weak but at least you made an attempt at creating some. Flow was kinda choppy and multies weren't present at all. Structure of the verse was decent but you could really use some elevatin....
Vote goes to Center Sight
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aight..keep these words in center of ya sight,
its either fight or flight, so this lil boi is about to bite,
COULD OF BEEN WORDED BETTER, FLOWS OFF
ima like mike tyson, i be bitin ears,all this kid is doin is, lip sync'in like brittany spears,
youz about to end your career,mine is about to be made,
WTF
im drivin by in sick pourches while this kids walkin,people throw rocks at this kid...just for talking,
you say shit but i dont hear it, ya voice should be altered like steven hawking,
ya rhymes are slipery like droping the soap in jail, ima gonna be gawking,
NOT BAD, COULD BE BETTER
people are gonna laugh at you,so theres no point of stalking, the rap game,
this kid could be the black micheal jackson, touch lil kids too get fame,
but everyones knows flamers dont spit, they swollow,pick a spot on the cock N take aim..
NICE FIRST 2 THEN THE 3RD THROWS IT OFF
its the end of ya text faze this wack POS gets blazed
ya life is over.. when i put an end to your net days
NOT BAD, COULD BE BETTER
ive seen k spit and to be honest ya rhymes are horrid
i mean abnormally bad.. this kids border line retarded
NICE
hes here n there, barely flowin n you aint sayin shit
'cept filler filler filler & our interest is fading quick
LOL NICE AGAIN
ya just another stat, ya wackness is bringin me down
he makes me wanna throw up.. maybe i'll swing him around
NA
it dont take a genious to see k is gonna die first
ya sign off was perfect.. but it shoulda been in my verse!
LOL
V/CENTER SIGHT. His Punches Were Much Harder Hitting. It Was Actually Readable And Flowed Nice. K You Have Potential, Fix Up Your Structure And You Should Be Ight
