Printable View
this was a hot collab, all artists did as the follows, HAD GREAT Rhyme scheme, the consistency was steadily flowing, the vocab was good, on most part, the rhyming was there, the flow was cracking, the overall overlook of the rhyme was a very creative and nice piece, i enjoyed reading every long ass line of it haha :laugh: but anyway if you got time please check out my new OM Scared of the Future....peace
could yall say somthin about what yall thought of my verse pls id like to how i did individually too..............thnx
GhettoFabolous: Multis were pretty good, seemed a bit forced at some points, but they were still nice...flow and structure was pretty good.. overall it was a nice drop
Crowd-Pleaser: Multis were ok... wordplay was good... flow was also good.. same with structure...finisher was good.. nice drop
TwiztedReborn: Structure was very good...lol i think eveyrones structure was pretty good, same with flow... multis were nice, helped the flow alot..nice verse
StatQuo08: wordplay was good... structure was ok..punches were good... as i said, yours and everyones flow was good...nice drop
MiXed ToXins: short lol... for what u had, it was good... would be better if it was longer but yeah.. nice shit
Sylentz: again, nice flow and structure... vocab was good... wordplay was ok... didnt see to many multis, but this was a nice drop none the less..
Tha-Joka: liked ya flow and style... wordplay was decent... didnt see to many mulits in this one either... but i liked this.. nice drop
Amp: nice drop.. flow was pretty nice... vocab was ok.. punches were good.. you had a good drop, nice shit...
Moe: haha, alot of nameplay.. nice..vocab was pretty good...flow and structure was good, like everyone elses lol..nice drop
haha nice shit guys.. keep droppin ill collabs like this... y'all came hard... didnt really have a favor, you all came good... strucutre in each verse was good.. mixed toxins verse was short, would be ill if it was longer... but nice drop from all
My open mic:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=166589
^ thanks yo... we'll check your drops too.
fab- you came kinda weak a lotta multi's nothing was too creative. sorry dog when you are bragging you gotta come up with something nobody has ever heard before. and it seemed like the whole thing was a build up to the last line and it wasnt strong enough. -6.5/10
cp- you had some witty lines in there. and a couple of multi's to go along with it. it was good. i liked your last line. it was a little risky but i thought it ended things nicely. i got the message that u guys are serious.7.5/10
tr- i loved every thing about yours except the fourth line. i hated how you chopped it at the end and said that game. i am sorry but that really pissed me off. other then that it was cool the first couple of lines really drew me in. 7.5/10
sq- you came pretty basic to me i had heard everyone of your lines before nothing new but you kept things moving a little. it wasnt boring just not exciting either. 6.5/10
mt- that was simply shit i am sorry but not only did you make yourself look bad but you brought down the quality of the crews work with this drop. 2/10
sly- another basic drop nothing fancy some bad wording. the last line was probably the best in your verse. not bad but once again not very good either. need something more creative. 6.5/10
tj- not too bad i liked how you tied everything together with the first line. i thought some things could have been worded better and once again you could have been more creative with it. but not bad. 7.5/10
amp- this was the best one so far. once again there were some wording issues but it was not bad. i kinda like the repetition in this one. the last two lines made this an above average verse for you the rest was only decent. 8/10
moe- finally. whew i was begining to wonder. by far the best verse very clever word play. i like how you incorperated the names. showed knowledge. nice multi's seemed like everything just fit perfectly. very good verse and by far the best. 9.5/10
now i would apprecitate it if i would get some feedback on my piece cuz i took some time on this.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=166753
^ Oh.. When I said "thats game"
I meant something like "game over"
Get it?
Ohh! Shit MOE.
I see yo sword is double bladed
I can see why u tha' greatest
but my daggers slayin camen. Kudos
Up............. Thanks For Feed
can we get some more feedback.....................damn
Aight, you flowed pretty nice, and you all had decent drops. Some were more dope than others. The one that stood out the most for me was sylentz he spat the dopest to me. All yall did good, and you had some nice rhymes. 8.5/10 keep droppin
^ Thanks For The Feed,
Me= Dopest ;)
this was overall pretty nice couple pretty good lines but a few wack lines too...I ain't gonna brake this down cuz it's way too much for me....still hot dogs....keep it reppin...pz
thanks for feed :D
Hi Credz :P
yea yall kinda did say your crew name way too much
but it was still dope
I really liked the rhyme scheme yall used it helped it flow beautifully
stay up and keep droppin
oh yea the metas were nice too
eh Sylentz ur conceited lol...
uppin this thanx for the feed