yo uppin 2 keep the votes comming in alright
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yo uppin 2 keep the votes comming in alright
yo duval, you came kinda weak on this one i've seen a hella lot betta from you seemed like you were rushin
silent-damn you said fuck 7 times in ten lines wuz hood wit that seemed like you aint had shit to say....
ima have to give it to silent for effort..duval cut the slackin, you can do better, and silent u can too seen better from both yall
vote/ silent
Oh I was I don't take the time to actually think about it but thanks for votin anyways
uppin 3 yeah i sayed fuck too many times lol thanks for votes so 2 more votes and this is over
both came pretty weak but silent, you didn't have any good punches really...nothin that really stood out to me. duval, you didn't come much better, but you pulled it out. silent, werk on ya structure and shit, and yall'll b straight.
v/duval
hit up this battle honestly:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=171500
that battle was sooooooo shit,both verses where weak and there was no punches at all,even if u had punches,both of ur mental capacities is sooo light weighted that the punches wouldnt make sense
yo dont forget to vote on the poll battle coem on this battle was good
yo like peeps thsi was a good battle come on 2 votes and it over
last time we battled you sayed you fucked up?/
well you name is duvalrapstar it should be buttercup/
.vs.
nothind special.
Silent j, atleast you tried to throw a punch, some of your shit was a lil streched so try and cut some of the lines back, flow was a bit off aswell as your structure due to it being streched in some places. You've elevated a fair bit, keep battling and you'll go better.
Duval, half your shit didn't even rhyme. Work on punching better concepts and strech your lines bout 3 times as long as wat they already are. Weak verse overall, try actually punching next time.
V//silent j for actually attempting to punch. pz.
uppin 4 come on one more vote and this over
I gotta give this 1 to silent j cause he did a little better. Duval u aint really give a effort shorty!! u should've came harder, Come harder next time and u'll have a better chance!!!
yo jay you forgot to poll vote man lol
yo iam uppin 4 come on lets end this