uppin yall any kind of feedback
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uppin yall any kind of feedback
want feed back............ur loosing 3-0
yeah feedback as in shit that helps u elevate..as in what this sites about...dumb fuckQuote:
Originally Posted by Crowd-Pleaser
uppin #2 come on yall
4# uppin
uppin #3
dont sleep
dis my last up #5
uppin #4 we need some heads to vote in here yall
last up....we need votes on this shit
leave a link and ill hit u back
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v/jerz killer
tongue you didnt come hard at all, your verse was mostly filler you didnt really throw any punches....you didnt really have any hard hitting lines which makes it almost impossible to win........jerz killer you came way harder than tongue and that is way you take this....you out punched him and your verse had more creativity
hit this up honestly
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=165518
t0ngue, your structure and flow needs to be worked on man. it's not consistent and it takes away from the rest of your verse. you attempted some punches with creativity and wittiness, but your wording was really off so it made them less effective. overall, you need to work on your flow, structure, and wording because it really hurt you here.
jerz, your verse was okay. your flow and structure was a lot better than t0ngue's was. you had some witty punches with creativity that hit a lot harder than t0ngue's did, because you wording was better. overall, you came a lot harder and wittier than t0ngue in this battle, which is why you get my vote.
v/ jerzkiller
I can't vote, but in my opinion, both yall was roken that mik, some good punches, some wordplay, kouple personals ta spice it up ya know wat i'm sayin. I think jerz took thys. it seemed his verse was just kummin a lil harder