haha, nah sun, im messin...your shit was hot dawg, great flow, great wordplay...vet material in my book. one of the best works ive read on this site.
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haha, nah sun, im messin...your shit was hot dawg, great flow, great wordplay...vet material in my book. one of the best works ive read on this site.
to tell you the honest truth no this is not vet material not trying to hurt your net ego or anything but yeah it had its points with all the metas and inner rhyme scheme but missed out on a more emotional piece story like.. it needed to have more depth to it . I did like the way you did incorporiate other things in this but you are on the right track but write because you love too. Not because you think you have something to prove to this site
Yo dogg that shit was hot i think u got da skillz to be a Vet already...good shit man..keep it comin
nice shit family
I See Vet Comin... Shit Was Hot, Keep Spittin
Stay Up Folk
uppin..... I got another one comin to me it'll be up soon.............
yo i liked this peice a lot....the realest in everyway and the shit us fuckin dope....loved the structure and the way you closed this shit
keeeep on uppin with ya shit
pce
ight uppin.....
this is definetly vet material, feelin the flow and the vocab alot, it was a hot drop, feelin the rhyme scheme and everything, nice drop lookin for you more in the future!
I didnt like it.
Blame me or something but egh it really didnt appeal to me.
It was decent.