Gunz - You were trying to play with some concepts and be creative. That's great and all, but battles are about punches. Your stuff did not flow, felt awkward, and just wasn't hitting. I think it's cause the setups had nothing to do with the 2nd part of the bar. Like that bathroom stall thing.. how does that relate to theo upshaw? Your verse was just awkward man
Theo - Your verse was very short and I've seen most of the shit you wrote before. However, played is better than bad. You managed in very short lines to throw punches at him. If you'd made your shit more complex it'd have been much better, but easily enough. The AIM thing hit him, the has been, and opener were ideas i've seen before, but they're all decent.
Vote - Theo
