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check out my open mix the face of fear, and ill get u some more replies for this
Will check it in a bit.
w00t w00t up again
beginning paragraph = ehh
rest = good, except the ending seemed forced flow wise..
vote - no.. pretty damn close...keep trying to get in legends tic... i think you'll make it in the next few pieces.
Better be :(
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Tic, it's nice to see you active man, keep at it. This peice was good for many reasons, one being how well it held my attention, simplistic in areas, but the meter was damn good. Easy to read aloud and the sotry was cool. In my honest opinion, no this is not legends material, but a fine read. You can get at me for an indepth anaylsis of why, you know how to reach me.
Word, appreciate the feedback.
I'm workin on a collab with someone right now.
Should be dope when we drop it...
Anyways.. get on AIM Bounce
I will not be on AIM untill after my gig tonight, that is if I am able to operate a computer later. I predict I will be FUCKEDED UPEDED!
Lol aight, good luck with that.
Get at me tomorrow or some ish
i hated it basiclly the whole thing was just bull shit i dont know maby its because im the happy type to be spending vacation with family yeah vocabulary was great you seem to read alot but its too long also and it reminds me of a happy rich white family who can give a shit about the poor
What the hell are you on?
Weed